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One Chance

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Dark Poet
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One Chance
Dark Poet Posted: Tue, May 22 2012 11:01 PM Reply

You only get one chance

One chance to live

If you want that chance to last

Grab it and don't lt go

Hold onto it with all your strength

Don't let go until you've made your peace

You only get one chance

So cherish it and hold on as long as you can

Don't waste your chance

It is a privilege that can be lost forever

I just started writing about a year ago and am wondering if I am any good, feedback of any kind is welcome.

 
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thewordmaster
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Re: One Chance
thewordmaster replied on Fri, May 25 2012 12:19 AM Reply

A tad wordy - main points:

One chance to live; to last

Hold it with strength; make peace with it

One chance, cherish it forever

Don't waste  your chance

from childhood's hour I have not been As others were - I have not seen

As others saw - i could not bring My passions from a common spring

(from Alone - Edgar Allan Poe)

 

 
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