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Started by FReagle at 09-03-2009 8:07 PM. Topic has 0 replies.
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   09-03-2009, 8:07 PM
FReagle

Joined on 05-29-2009
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Two Restaurant Reviews...one popular article, one less so.

I posted two articles on a website and one attracts perhaps 10 readers a week.  Another attracted about 40 readers it's first two days.  I wonder if the second one is that much better than the other or did I just get lucky. 

 Here are the links to both articles.  Is there anything you notice that would explain the difference? 

Thank you.  Whatever I did in the second article, I need to keep doing.  Smile [:)]  Thank you for your feedback. 

Tom

 

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/1365979/two_visits_to_the_park_place_diner.html?cat=16

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/2106595/a_visit_to_freddies_tavern_in_west.html?cat=8

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