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Started by peaceful mom at 03-15-2009 1:19 PM. Topic has 1 replies.
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   03-15-2009, 1:19 PM
peaceful mom

Joined on 02-06-2009
Posts 3
i think about?

   I think about life and  everything that's in it ,

   I think about  the people in my life that care for me

   I think about  how much i care for them  

   I  think about in the people in the world ,that they have nothing  

   I think about  they do  have something called love

   I think about when people lock their hearts away from the world forever

   I think about forever  is a long time in life

   I think about  forever could be as close as  tomorrow

   I think about tomorrow ,anything is possible

   I think about  everything that does happen ,if we see or not  

   I think about the unknown ,stills happens

   I think about if we don't see it  ,how do we know it happen

   I think  about  we just  have to  believe  in unknow things

   I think about life and the  journeys  we all take in life

   I   THINK ABOUT  LIFE ,I LOVE THE THINGS THAT I THINK ABOUT

 

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   03-26-2009, 10:24 PM
ganz

Joined on 04-08-2006
Posts 9
Re: i think about?

Wow, I'm a mom too, and understand how much you care.  Very little is perfect in poetry, and I admire you had enough to write and post.  keep writing if it helps you, you inspired me.

 ganz

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