Second, it is only an exceprt. Only you know where it's going.
The benefit of comment from other writers outweighs an almost nonexistent risk of having your work stolen.
I hope to see some of your work. All the best - Craven
Thanks for responding! Though I have a reader that has been kind enough to give objective opinions on my work, it would be very helpful to receive input from fellow writers. I will be posting my first chapter today. If you (or anyone else) has the time to read it I would love your feedback.