I'd appreciate your feedback on some issues with my writing. My
non-fiction story is about the history of the Mustang Ranch brothel and
the lives of its former owners Joe and Sally Conforte circa 1976-1980.
My writing for the most part is third person omniscient narrative. I
break form in the opening with Joe's and Sally's thoughts an a monlogue
of sorts. Their thoughts then lead into scenes.
A couple of scenes are written from the POV of the group of prostitutes
that work at the Mustang. The scenes are more thought than action.
The story is written in the present tense.
These style issues work for me but they may seem quircky or odd to
someone else. Do I need to post a sample so you understand better?
Thanks to all that reply.