Re: Lets go Poets!

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Lets go Poets!


Flozell 03-19-2008, 1:10 AM

Come on people, post your poems. Don't be shy. We/I need this. It'll be fine, I know ya'll have plenty of poems to post, poems that you keep to yourself, that mean so much to you, but you don't dare share. Please Share!

I have horrible grammar, but that doesn't stop me. I have a good story I want to tell, or a idle moment in time that was so beautiful to me, I have to write it, and post it so that everyone who reads it may somehow feel as I did that one moment in time. Post poems! Please!  I'd love to read them.

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southern hearted writer 03-26-2008, 9:49 PM

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Yolanda 03-30-2008, 11:30 AM

Here's one I love to share often:

COOL, COTTON COMFORT

 

I wore him like a tight pair of jeans,

and he looked damn good on me.

It was almost obscene,

that tight pair of jeans.

 

He didn't fit,

and I was proud of it

and the way they'd stare

at that man I'd wear.

It was almost obscene,

that pair of jeans.

 

Well, I'm older today,

and I've got a man that fits

like a pair of sweats, heather grey,

and he looks damn good on me.

And that tight pair of jeans?

Well, I threw him away.

 

 

from:

Spirits and Oxygen

Copyright © 2003

by Yolanda Coulaz

Purple Sage Press

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Jackpine 04-15-2008, 8:50 AM

Hi all, I'll play -

The following written after our moving from the Big City to a 4th tier 'burb; it was a tough transition. We felt quite alienated after the move. In the city, everyone talked to each other. But out here in a townhome community on a pond, there are strange, invisible boundaries. Everyone drives straight into their attached garage; contact is minimal, you meet no one. We wonder - does anyone actually live in those other structures, behind those dark windows? There is a certain unease, and yet . . .

 

 

Hawthorne

 

 

Cityscape - closed doors, sullen opaque windows

Looking outward like so many zombie eyes

Staring at everything, seeing nothing.

 

Countryscape - a rabbit sits motionless, frozen.

Small birds bounce through the air, careening off

Currents of flying insects.

 

A hunger for home, a need for nature has built

This paradox place . . . instant strangers: neighbors,

And long gone memories from childhood, the pond.

 

Re: Lets go Poets!


lasher 07-09-2008, 6:18 PM

Hey now Jackpine,

Nice take on the differences between city and burb. I would've thought people would've been more open in the burbs......I've been a stranger in big cities and small, and the general attitude I got was wariness. No faith in mankind any more today, oh well, as the Doors once sang.."people are strange, when you're a stranger........"   Here's my take on small town USA....

Where I Come From

 

A scarecrow leers at me today.....

He lurks behind a fence,

standing silent sentinel

against the scavengers above.

 

There are many fences

where I come from -

parceling fortresses

behind tree-lined streets.

 

Families gather at the local fields

to watch their children shag -

Clucking with friends while they

covet their neighbor's wives.

 

There are many churches

where I come from,

Sunday morning saints atoning

for a week of indulgence.

 

Careful eyes with pasted smiles

and a fairly hearty "How do ya do?"

are strewn about with the

wariness of a dog over a bone.

 

Yes, neighbors are watching

where I come from.

They guard their young against

the onslaught of pushers and pimps.

 

The long-arms ever on the prowl;

guarding their borders against

the rising tide of muggings and

infections from neighboring cities.

 

Small town USA is where I come

from; teeming with poise, pride and

petty rivalries - just all American

people living an all American dream.

 

 

 

 

 

 


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