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Started by JCL at 11-30-2007 7:38 PM. Topic has 1 replies.
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   11-30-2007, 7:38 PM
JCL

Joined on 12-01-2007
Posts 8
How to Describe an Gruesome Death In A Story

Hello To All;

Hey guys; I am writing beginning of this story but my murder victim dies in a gruesome death. I wanted to show the readers how this victim how he dies and where. I liked to have your suggestions how I would show it in the story.Blush [:I]

JCL

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   03-13-2008, 8:51 AM
Stella

Joined on 07-20-2007
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Re: How to Describe an Gruesome Death In A Story

Here'as what you gotta do: USE YOUR IMAGINATION!!!!

I write about many gruesome deaths, (i have a character that is really into it and pretty much does it for pleasure) so i think i know what i'm talking about. You don't need someone to tell you how to describe such a death. You can do it from the killer's POV, from the victim's, from both's or as a mere witness [make sure the killer doesnt see you in that case :)]

It's all about your mind and the way you see things. if you really want minute details, imagine you are the victim; imagine waht you think would be a gruesome way for you to die, something that really scares you only to think about it.

or imagine how would you like to kill somebody you really dont like.

 

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