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Started by jmar2 at 10-12-2005 1:40 PM. Topic has 4 replies.
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   10-12-2005, 1:40 PM
jmar2

Joined on 08-30-2005
southwest Virginia
Posts 173
Time for a new challenge!
Hi y'all.  I'm gettin' bored seein' my last challenge sittin' out there, lonely as a nice pile of wild ramps at the spring social.  So folks, how 'bout somethin' new.  Let's keep it short - 1000 words and under.  Something to do with football and Halloween.  There you go, have at it. 
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   10-12-2005, 2:18 PM
jmar2

Joined on 08-30-2005
southwest Virginia
Posts 173
Re: Time for a new challenge!
Ok, here's mine.  It's a little over 500 words.

Friday afternoon, Sara McKenzie was standing in front of the kitchen sink feeling sorry for herself.  “God”, she thought.  “It was that time again: football season and Halloween.” 
Sara resignedly bet herself that she’d get stuck taking the kids around again.  After all, Halloween this year was on a Monday night.  Suddenly a glimmer of an idea began to form and she excitedly, half ran to the wall phone and called her best friend Marge.

During Sunday’s afternoon game, Sara hesitantly approached the subject of Halloween with her husband.  Fortunately it was halftime and Bill had come into the kitchen for another beer.
“Hey babe, wanna fit in a quickie before the kickoff?” he leered at her. 
“Thanks hon, but I wouldn’t want to make you fall asleep and miss the second half.  By the way, do you mind if I take the kids with me for Trick or Treat this year?”
As she expected, Bill heartily agreed.  He went back to the couch with his beer, unable to believe his good luck in escaping yet another argument over ‘who does what with the kids’.

Monday night came, and Sara was pleased with her costume.  She was dressed as a 1940's gumshoe, a la Sam Spade.  Leaning over the sofa’s edge so she didn’t block Bill’s ESPN review of the same games he had just watched, she pecked his cheek and told him ‘not to worry if she and the kids were late returning’.

Taking their two children, she drove over to Marge’s house.  Marge and their other best girl friend, Louise, were there waiting for her.  Denise, their regular babysitter was also there.  As Sara checked the kids costumes, she reminded Denise of all the Trick Or Treat rules: check the candy, be back at Marge’s by eleven, two choices only tonight and then everyone off to the pajama party upstairs with some pizza and Wallace and Grommet on the DVD. 

Denise said she had it all down, “Like it’s SO not rocket science.”  The three women smiled and left the house wearing identical costumes.  They began cruising their neighborhood and stopped first at the address of Bill’s boss, Jim Anderson. 

Getting out of the car, Louise nervously asked, “Are you sure this is such a great idea?”
“Relax Lou," Marge said.  "I’m sick and tired of being a Monday night widow.  Anyone see any kids?”
Sara and Louise answered “No.” and they headed for the door.  As they stood on the stoop, Sara rang the bell.  When Mrs. Anderson answered, she was looking down into her large bowl of M&Ms, “Ok, now.  Just take two... Oh!  Good evening ladies.  My what interesting costumes.  Where are the children.”
Marge answered, “They’ll be around later Janet.  Is Jim in?”
“Yes he is, he’s getting ready for the game.  I’ll go get him.  Is anything wrong?”
“No Janet. Nothing’s wrong.  We just want to show him something.”

Janet went and spoke to her husband, and he followed he back to the door.  As he approached, the three women flashed open their trenchcoats revealing exactly what they wore underneath: nothing. 
They leaned forward and broke into a cheer. 
“NFL.  NFL.  Gee but Monday’s gone to Hell.”
“Look at her, look at me.”
“Aren’t we better than T.V.”

Almost falling down from laughter, the women closed their trenchcoats and ran out the door.  As they hurried back to the car, Sara said, “Ok girls, who’s next?”
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   11-01-2005, 1:25 PM
Andy Andrews

Joined on 08-18-2005
Texas
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Re: Time for a new challenge!

Okay, that was funny!

What a story.  I had no idea where it was going.  Good job.

Andy

 

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   11-28-2005, 10:19 PM
LinnAnn

Joined on 11-06-2003
Posts 3,566
Re: Time for a new challenge!

Cracked me up!  Too bad the forum has gone downhill.  There were so many contributors before they changed the rules to subscribee's only. sigh.  There would have been so many responses to this!  Good going!

love, LinnAnn

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   12-04-2005, 1:11 PM
jmar2

Joined on 08-30-2005
southwest Virginia
Posts 173
Re: Time for a new challenge!
I moved it over to the other site,  (Writersdigest) and put it in the Critiques Forum there under the thread of "A little something left over from Halloween". 

John

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